As we acquire more knowledge, things do not become more comprehensible, but more complex and more mysterious.
'Ignorance is bliss'. Most of us would have come across this saying at sometime or the other. Have we ever wondered the reason why this saying has succeeded in carving out a niche for itself in our world? The reason is that one cannot contest the issue that in the process of acquiring more knowledge, things do become more complex and mysterious. However, it is not necessary that things do not become more comprehensible in the bargain. One does begin to comprehend things easily over the time spent in acquiring knowledge. Nevertheless, the scales tilt in the favor of the latter whenever comprehension and mystery surrounding an object or phenomena are taken into account as a result of the ongoing process for acquiring knowledge.
History of mankind is testimony to the fact that most of the earlier civilizations worshipped the sun and the moon as they were the only celestial beings as per the astronomical knowledge prevalent in those times. Centuries have gone past, but mankind is still intrigued by the complexities and mysteries of the universe. Man has gained immense knowledge in the subject of astronomy, but our universe and the celestial bodies continue to intrigue and baffle humans. There is no limit to the knowledge that has been acquired on this subject over the last few centuries. However, each new discovery opens new doors to further speculations and theories. Along the way, certain other aspects have indeed become more comprehensible than they were before, but this understanding of the universe is nothing as compared to the dark mysteries which have not yet been unraveled by man. These mysteries and complexities have arisen from the knowledge that man has acquired after years of research and study.
After one has acquired knowledge it is imperative that the knowledge be applied for clearing the complexities surrounding a thing. However, in the process of solving the intricacies involved, it is possible that the solution to the complexities may involve another thing or a phenomenon which stands unexplained. This would stimulate man to look for solutions to the new mysteries that have thus been unraveled and the process continues probably at the cost of making something comprehensible.
Therefore, it would not be incorrect to say that things, by and large, become more complex and mysterious as one acquires knowledge. However, one cannot refute the fact that there are certain things and phenomena that do become comprehensible as a result of acquiring knowledge, but at times this comprehensibility may be insignificant compared to the complexities that have arisen as a result of the knowledge acquired.
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Suggestion:
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'however', 'if', 'look', 'may', 'nevertheless', 'so', 'still', 'therefore', 'thus', 'another thing', 'as a result', 'by and large']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.21199143469 0.240241500013 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.188436830835 0.157235817809 120% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0856531049251 0.0880659088768 97% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0535331905782 0.0497285424764 108% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0235546038544 0.0444667217837 53% => OK
Prepositions: 0.126338329764 0.12292977631 103% => OK
Participles: 0.0706638115632 0.0406280797675 174% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.98241066784 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0235546038544 0.030933414821 76% => OK
Particles: 0.00214132762313 0.0016655270985 129% => OK
Determiners: 0.122055674518 0.0997080785238 122% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0149892933619 0.0249443105267 60% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.017130620985 0.0148568991511 115% => OK
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 2657.0 2732.02544248 97% => OK
No of words: 431.0 452.878318584 95% => OK
Chars per words: 6.16473317865 6.0361032391 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.55637350225 4.58838876751 99% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.38747099768 0.366273622748 106% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.292343387471 0.280924506359 104% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.222737819026 0.200843997647 111% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.169373549884 0.132149295362 128% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98241066784 2.79330140395 107% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 219.290929204 92% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.4686774942 0.48968727796 96% => OK
Word variations: 51.5295181708 55.4138127331 93% => OK
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6194690265 92% => OK
Sentence length: 22.6842105263 23.380412469 97% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5290181943 59.4972553346 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.842105263 141.124799967 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6842105263 23.380412469 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.684210526316 0.674092028746 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.94800884956 81% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.21349557522 19% => OK
Readability: 51.9185492734 51.4728631049 101% => OK
Elegance: 1.54032258065 1.64882698954 93% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19338156757 0.391690518653 49% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.155391079987 0.123202303941 126% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0915978843889 0.077325440228 118% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.554861347562 0.547984918172 101% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.181428828382 0.149214159877 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955437059017 0.161403998019 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116713522419 0.0892212321368 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.50378150857 0.385218514788 131% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0836951046365 0.0692045440612 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170034514732 0.275328986314 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.103337801963 0.0653680567796 158% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.4325221239 96% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.30420353982 38% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.88274336283 143% => OK
Positive topic words: 5.0 7.22455752212 69% => OK
Negative topic words: 2.0 3.66592920354 55% => OK
Neutral topic words: 6.0 2.70907079646 221% => OK
Total topic words: 13.0 13.5995575221 96% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.