"We can usually learn much more from people whose views we share than from people whose views contradict our own."; disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning.
Usually we learn from our mistakes and our social outstructure. Social structure made by people, norms, etiquette and culture. We learn from them, use them , may be intentionally or unintentionally. From the view point let`s hope that do this practice really make us learn or they don`t? But if I tell that our views can be common but way to reach to this goal can be different from each other. There can be various method as well as tactics . It can be a bit grouchy or unconventional approach towards reaching your shared view .
Whether we like it or not same tactics and techniques can be a bit monotonous. Perhaps our shared vision can make us connected for building our future together. But it also creates some err in achieving our goals. Example: If a general in a battle always forms his army in the same manner , enemy can predict his every move and take preventive measure to tackle them. In this wilderness you have to be unpredictable and different tactics to win your battle just like to achieve your dream . An disagreement among the different perspective can cause stress and inhibit learning but it can create other doors towards your views. Many different perspective and many more different all can create a holistic approach towards the one view point. Most probably you will learn to think on different dimension. Without same shared view , can make us slow however we will learn from different views. We can mold ourselves to the betterment of this world and in a path of more refined views and goals. Since the era of homo-sapiens there was always different types of perspective views, philosophical thoughts and views. Again I can support in this regard that those difference make us strong and willful towards our view and make us choose the right view for all of us.
Basically as mentioned same perspective can make you quick learner and avoid the contradiction at the end. Unfortunately it also make us weaker because people can learn more from various types of views. A common goal can be achieved by a same shared view but different views towards the goal are more stronger in the sense of fundamental basis which is structured by complicated thinking, paths and goals. So different perspective is also essential tools to achieve your goals with more precise or well garnished view.
In sum, unless two opponents in a debate are each willing to play on the same field and by
the same rules, I concede that disagreement can impede learning. Otherwise, reasoned
discourse and debate between people with opposing viewpoints is the very foundation upon
which human knowledge advances. Accordingly, on balance the speaker is fundamentally
correct.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nd culture. We learn from them, use them , may be intentionally or unintentionally...
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...can be various method as well as tactics . It can be a bit grouchy or unconvention...
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...proach towards reaching your shared view . Whether we like it or not same tactic...
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...always forms his army in the same manner , enemy can predict his every move and ta...
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...r battle just like to achieve your dream . An disagreement among the different per...
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...attle just like to achieve your dream . An disagreement among the different perspe...
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... create other doors towards your views. Many different perspective and many more different all...
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...rent dimension. Without same shared view , can make us slow however we will learn ...
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...ction at the end. Unfortunately it also make us weaker because people can learn more...
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...ut different views towards the goal are more stronger in the sense of fundamental basis which...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, however, if, may, really, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 12.4196629213 161% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 52.0 33.0505617978 157% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 58.6224719101 85% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 12.9106741573 54% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2238.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 452.0 442.535393258 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95132743363 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61088837703 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79187214352 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 215.323595506 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504424778761 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 704.065955056 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0387610819 60.3974514979 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.0769230769 118.986275619 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 23.4991977007 74% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.69230769231 5.21951772744 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.97078651685 141% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.372319674226 0.243740707755 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111202745065 0.0831039109588 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862635262258 0.0758088955206 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.138904520904 0.150359130593 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125252796507 0.0667264976115 188% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 14.1392134831 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.1639044944 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.87 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 100.480337079 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum six paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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