It is beautifully said that -Every struggle in your life have shaped you into the person you are today. This topic raises the contentious issue of whether we learn our most valuable lessons in life from struggling with our limitations or from enjoying our success.While each side has its pros and cons, As the above quote says I believe that most valuable lesson in life can be learn from struggling with our limitions. Indisputably, one could say that some important lesson could be learn while enjoying through your successes Nevertheless, most valuable lessons is only taught by hard times in a persons life.
First of all, If we closely look at any successful person life-story such as Bill Gates, Steve Jobs or even Michael Dell, All of this personality has one thing in comman that is there struggle in life. This struggle is made them what they are now. They have learnt many lessons struggling through there limitation while building there businesses. They may have failed many times in there life, which taught them many most valuable lessons may be regarding businesses , but this is what shaped them to what there are now.
Furthermore, If we are enjoying through our success then we hardly struggle from anything , we dont have much limitation and many a times people after becoming successful become ignorent and arrogant. As a result people people start ignoring so valuable lesson because of there carefree attitude.Sometimes we heard saying things from such people that- dont teach me i know everything and I even dont care.Therefore, we start ignoring towards valuable lesson while enjoying through our success.
Thirdly, Struggle teach us to be minimalist since we have limited resources. Many small lesson man learn when he is going through struggling phase. I often heard from my father saying that- Dont waste food, because there could be someone who dont get a piece of beard to eat. They teach us this, beacuase they have seen hard time in there life. Also there may be bunch of people around us when you are rich and sucessful, but it matter the most that who is standing with you when you have nothing. This is another most valuable lesson that you learn during your struggles. The true color and true faces of people can only be revealed in such phase.Therefore, we could say that the struggle and hard time in a persons life teach us most valuable lessons.
In conclusion, Although some lessons could be learned while enjoying through your successes, But most valuable lesson in life can only be learned struggling through your limitations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, look, may, nevertheless, regarding, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, while, in conclusion, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 12.4196629213 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 11.3162921348 133% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 33.0505617978 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 12.9106741573 15% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2139.0 2235.4752809 96% => OK
No of words: 433.0 442.535393258 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93995381062 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.56165014514 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60818148308 2.79657885939 93% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.448036951501 0.4932671777 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.0 704.065955056 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 6.24550561798 176% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 3.10617977528 225% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.1285563598 60.3974514979 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.823529412 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4705882353 23.4991977007 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64705882353 5.21951772744 185% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 25.0 7.80617977528 320% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351662192009 0.243740707755 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122168461638 0.0831039109588 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0990376652937 0.0758088955206 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.21807744203 0.150359130593 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113547159316 0.0667264976115 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 14.1392134831 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 8.38706741573 85% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 100.480337079 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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