We learn our most valuable lessons in life from struggling with our limitations rather than from enjoying our successes.
every individual is not perfect in any aspect of life.In fact,both strengths and weaknesses as a combination make up a person.The statement states that people often learn valuable lessons from struggling with their limitations than enjoying their successes.Life is vast cocept and it needs many factors to assess and evaluate it.In my opinion,learning a lesson is crucial point in journey to reach success.Hence,people learn worthy lessons from overcoming their weaknesses which would eventually lead them to success.Therefore,I agree with the statement and would like to substantiate by point of view in following way.
In this modern complicated world that we humans developed,learning is a continuous process.In fact,it became inherent in everyones's lifestyle.Competition is growing and everyone is in a rat race chasing goals and achieving success.The example of a student who aspires to get rich or well paying job would strive for excellent grades and acquire knowledge would explain that limitations and constraints teach best lessons.A student need to evaluate and assess himself based on his academic performance to know if he is progressive enough and well suited to reach his target or not.For suppose,he is secured lot of good grades and excellent in every subject,then it would obviously lead to over confidence.he tends to ignore negatives in him and have a careless attitude that could betray him at some point of time in future.On the other hand,if a student is wise enough to analyse himself where did he go wrong,then he might get to know the weak point on which he could put extra efforts and work out in transforming it into his strength.
it is always better to consider weakness and understand them with brain instead to taking them to heart.many times,the difference between a winner and looser is very much subtle.The person who gains insight into his limitations and bold enough to neutralise them would make it to the destination rather than the one who believes in pride of success.
There are many people who suffer from shyness,social anxiety,depression etc.these qualities often make people feel insecure about themselves.Further,some people dont like their own body or their appearance or looks and often feel bad.They need to overcome these barriers and see the other side of curtain.The world has witnessed many leaders,philosophers,scientists only after they defeated these issues. The very relevant example is Albert Einstein who was deemed as unfit for school and later on emerged himself as most renowned scientist in the world.
To conclude,it is completely agreeable to enjoy the taste of success but not to deny the fact that everyone need to work on their weakness and constraints more and do not hesitate to learn valuable lessons.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, look, so, then, therefore, well, in fact, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 12.4196629213 97% => OK
Conjunction : 26.0 14.8657303371 175% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 48.0 33.0505617978 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 58.6224719101 118% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2347.0 2235.4752809 105% => OK
No of words: 441.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.32199546485 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.58257569496 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.48470379149 2.79657885939 125% => OK
Unique words: 252.0 215.323595506 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571428571429 0.4932671777 116% => OK
syllable_count: 714.6 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 6.24550561798 128% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 20.2370786517 30% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 23.0359550562 317% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 298.264424071 60.3974514979 494% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 391.166666667 118.986275619 329% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.5 23.4991977007 313% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 15.0 5.21951772744 287% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 40.0 7.80617977528 512% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144690403707 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702292138441 0.0831039109588 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071065077387 0.0758088955206 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810221522777 0.150359130593 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733891617589 0.0667264976115 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.4 14.1392134831 286% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.62 48.8420337079 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.92365168539 184% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 12.1743820225 261% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.76 12.1639044944 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.34 8.38706741573 135% => OK
difficult_words: 114.0 100.480337079 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.0 11.8971910112 261% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.2 11.2143820225 278% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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