No field of study can advance significantly unless it incorporates knowledge and experience from outside that field.
every domain or field of study has its own significance and importance in driving humans towards advancement.The features and characteristics define the nature of the field and also differentiate from one another.The above statement asserts that a field os study needs to incorporate knowledge and experience from outside to make a significant progress.To my conscience,I would disagree with the claim made by statement and would like to substantiate my view in following way.
Firstly,whether help is needed from external sources is determined by magnitude of research and development of the domain.For example,take archaeology which is study of ancient objects and history.Archaeologists need to have a tight grip on knowledge related to past civilisations and lifestyle and need to extract more information about antique objects.this helps in knowing more about our ancestors and how the lifestyle has changed and reasons behind it between them and modern humans.Similarly,another example could be modern computer science technologies like Machine learning and Artificial Intelligence.Both have been crucial playing crucial role in automating most of the things used by humans.Both of these technological concepts are considered as milestones in advancement of computer technology without gathering any knowledge or experience from outside of their domain or field.
With growing expectations and goals humans requirements are also increasing.this inturn mounts pressure on advanceing every domain and make breakthroughs.However,making a significant impact taks time and patience.For instance,even after making huge technological progress,there is still no cure for deadly diseases like HIV and last stage cancers.The pharmaceutical field is improving day by day with minor increments and eventually after gathering enough information and experience,scientists would definitely come up with solution.
With all this being said,it is wrong to deny the fact that every field doesn't need any assistance and knowledge from external sources.Sometimes,the experience and advice from other domains is essential in delivering a breakthrough but in the sense this experience and knowledge would only serve as catalyst to the process.Consider the modern invention of robotic surgery in medical field.It is proclaimed that robots perform the surgeries more efficiently and accurately than a doctor without any unwanted effects.It is a result of two fields or domains namely medical sciences and computer sciences.In short,the robotic surgery is something that boosts the success rate of medical sciences.
To conclude,domain needs mainly its own knowledge and experience to make notable progress.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, similarly, so, still, for example, for instance, in short
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 30.0 14.8657303371 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.3162921348 44% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 65.0 58.6224719101 111% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 12.9106741573 178% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2315.0 2235.4752809 104% => OK
No of words: 388.0 442.535393258 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.96649484536 5.05705443957 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43821085614 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.86249585322 2.79657885939 138% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 215.323595506 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585051546392 0.4932671777 119% => OK
syllable_count: 721.8 704.065955056 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.59117977528 119% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 6.24550561798 96% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 77.0 23.0359550562 334% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 265.279475271 60.3974514979 439% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 463.0 118.986275619 389% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 77.6 23.4991977007 330% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.4 5.21951772744 372% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 31.0 7.80617977528 397% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 10.2758426966 49% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304170049212 0.243740707755 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.161312186768 0.0831039109588 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0904394468487 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161312186768 0.150359130593 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0904394468487 0.0667264976115 136% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 45.5 14.1392134831 322% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -32.06 48.8420337079 -66% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 20.3 7.92365168539 256% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.9 12.1743820225 303% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 18.53 12.1639044944 152% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.5 8.38706741573 149% => OK
difficult_words: 124.0 100.480337079 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 11.8971910112 265% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 32.8 11.2143820225 292% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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