The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
All the people in a society or a country have right to know about laws and policies of authorities. They can question authorities to get more information or show their disagreement about policies implemented by them, it will prevent them from doing whatever they want to do and people will feel more involvement in the system. Our history represents many examples where people of society couldn't question or have no right to question lead society in the darkness and caused damage on humentarian ground.
One of the very famous emporers, Badshah Aurangjeb, once he passed a rule that nobody in his kingdom will sing or play musical instruments, and if anybody caught doing this will be killed. At that time if anybody will question him will get punishment. In this kingdom, music was otiose for long time. The people use to love music, but can't enjoy it anymore and were not allowed to give their opinion or ask question, which caused danger existence of music in India. Imagine if people in those times would have questioned authorities then things would have been different.
Another extreme example is Hitler, he took away all the rights from people including question him, on his decisions for public and he killed huge number of people who were not following his relegion or standing against him. All this mess happened just because public lost right to question.
Therefore, for the well being to society, it is necessary its people to question authorities, so that they don't make such decisions which doesn't line up with betterment of society.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ic was otiose for long time. The people use to love music, but cant enjoy it anymor...
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...time. The people use to love music, but cant enjoy it anymore and were not allowed t...
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Message: Did you mean 'had questioned'?
Suggestion: had questioned
...India. Imagine if people in those times would have questioned authorities then things would have been...
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Suggestion: doesn't
...hat they dont make such decisions which doesnt line up with betterment of society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, then, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 33.0505617978 85% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 12.9106741573 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1298.0 2235.4752809 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 262.0 442.535393258 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95419847328 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.55969084622 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54861249987 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625954198473 0.4932671777 127% => OK
syllable_count: 401.4 704.065955056 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.740449438202 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.2370786517 54% => Need more sentences, or put a space between two sentences.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.5155848338 60.3974514979 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 118.986275619 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.09090909091 5.21951772744 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147066712906 0.243740707755 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0578922476223 0.0831039109588 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453855142439 0.0758088955206 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.099184173409 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0449231939529 0.0667264976115 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 14.1392134831 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 48.8420337079 116% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 100.480337079 53% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.