The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Questioning the authority of society has led to the great new reeforms in a socity and has contributed to the well-being of an individual in the past. In fact, the reforms were so radical that it has helped to progress our societies to new heights. Question the authority means keeping the provision for bringing about new changes which will mostly have positive impact on the society.
In the past, the women were regarded as someone who is good fit for the household chores. Most of them were deprived of education except a few privileged ones born in the wealthy family. It through questioning the authority back then, the women have been able to make tremendous progress in today's modern world. Though questioning may create factions within a society, if the voice is being raised for the good cause, it is worth it to do it. For instance, In USA, one of the most developed nation in the world, women have been deprived of right to vote for a quite long time. By constantly dogging the authority and staging protests women have secured women suffrage. It led to increased participation of women in the politics and engendered the idea of equal rights to man and woman. Women's represent a significant chunk of workforce today because they relentlessly pursued and fought with authority to secure their rights. For the prosperity of economy of most nations, women have contributed substantially. Therefore, questioning often leads to positive outcome.
Though those who question the authority are often percieved as iconoclast and heretic, neverthless, questioning often gives out the unexpected results and contributes to our understanding of the world. In the past, Galileo was persecuted for questioning the Heliocentric theory, sun and other planet revolves around the Earth. But his prediction that the Earth revolves around the Sun has debunked many myths in the past and were seminal in advancing our understanding of the Physics.
However, questioning the authority may not always lead to fruitful result. For instance, In Indian state Haryana, the women who raise voice for recieving educationare often met with dire consequences. Though questioning in tha past has led to many killing of women, the outlook of many new generations in Haryana is changing. Now people do not hesitate to send their girls to the school. Even though questioning the authoority may have its repuscussion, over the time a change in society can be brought, which lead to well being of an individual and unltimately, to the enhancement of well being of the society.
Therefore, questioning those in authority is important because it can pave the way for reforms that contribute to advancement of society as whole.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, so, then, therefore, well, for instance, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 14.8657303371 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 33.0505617978 64% => OK
Preposition: 72.0 58.6224719101 123% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 12.9106741573 70% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2263.0 2235.4752809 101% => OK
No of words: 444.0 442.535393258 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09684684685 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5903493882 4.55969084622 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89553372186 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506756756757 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 708.3 704.065955056 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.2370786517 109% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 23.0359550562 87% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.919987123 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.863636364 118.986275619 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1818181818 23.4991977007 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 5.21951772744 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164250200524 0.243740707755 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503662214592 0.0831039109588 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438182574383 0.0758088955206 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102092915003 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504472473641 0.0667264976115 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 14.1392134831 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 48.8420337079 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.1639044944 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.38706741573 101% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 100.480337079 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 11.2143820225 89% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.7820224719 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.5 Out of 6
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