A society is made my people. so, decision should be made my peoples. But in several cases people behave like selfish and they only thought about yourself, safety, employment and cleanness and their demand is about past,present contest and also future. For this reason i support that the well-being of a society is enhanced when many its people question authority.
First of all,all the decisions and choices made by a society in general are based on a authority work and their decision. Authority who is in power, some time misuse their position, and their decision is biased and corrupt. questioning people in the authority gives everyone in the society to express their opinions and even speak out against something that wrong.
Moreover, in education system nowadays, student are free to ask question about teaching method, teachers and study materials. This may include agreement or disagreement with the education systems. But this is help in authority to promote new way of thinking of certain idea or complains. For example, In a software, operating system are updating time to time. Because in company launch new things as customer demands or if customer reject their product company try to launch new things as a customer choice. Same thing happen in society and authority cases.
Additionally, Democracy is all about questioning people and here public voice is superpower of society. If people not questioning on the authority than authority will turn in dictator and corrupt. For Instance, in North Korea, country get turn worse, people cannot keep their opinion. To prevent from this condition people have to speak against the authority than people can except any change.
From the above reason and examples, i strongly believe that, the well-being of a society is enhanced when many people question on authority. because it can help in update new idea , save from corruption and contributing towards growth and development, make peace and happy society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in general, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 22.0 14.8657303371 148% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1668.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 318.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24528301887 5.05705443957 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66256608627 2.79657885939 95% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553459119497 0.4932671777 112% => OK
syllable_count: 521.1 704.065955056 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.2370786517 94% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 23.0359550562 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.7108751639 60.3974514979 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7894736842 118.986275619 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 23.4991977007 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15789473684 5.21951772744 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164726007828 0.243740707755 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598986352332 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934515267564 0.0758088955206 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102851291812 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630284044392 0.0667264976115 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 48.8420337079 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.1639044944 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.38706741573 97% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 100.480337079 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 11.2143820225 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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