The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
The sentence talks about the role of people in questioning the authority. I obviously agree with statement given. Every individual have to question the authority out of their right to do so which leads to efficient functioning of the every governmental and non-governmental organization. Questioning the authority also enhances the awareness among the citizens of the society of how different aspects of the developments play a crucial role in the well being of the society. This kind of awareness certainly enhances the well being of the society and puts it on high moral standards.
When citizens of a country are not given any right to question the authority it leads to impeding in the pace of development. This is because the people in the authority may behave as if they are the monarchs and every decision is made out of their self-interest and self-benefits. And we can never claim for the authority as those monarch authorities employee nepotism and keeps the power in their hands always.
When the constitutional laws of a country provides no power of questioning the seething people may suddenly burst out of anger on the authority. People come out to roads and mass protests raise to oust the authorities in power. These kind of situations make the country unstable and may even lead to nadir of those authorities and in country's fortune.
Consider a situation that happened in the bifurcation of Andhra Pradesh state of India. The then Congress president Sonia Gandhi made the decision to bifurcate the state with the doors of the parliament closed to any second opinions. This led the Congress party securing minimal seats than ever in AP and also in Telangana. And the party is now in dead state and there seems no way for it's fortune.
A well being of the society depends on the active coordination between citizens and authority. For this every citizen has to be provided with a right to question.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ntry unstable and may even lead to nadir of those authorities and in countrys fo...
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...d to nadir of those authorities and in countrys fortune. Consider a situati...
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...o be provided with a right to question.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, second, so, then, well, as to, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 19.5258426966 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 33.0505617978 51% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 58.6224719101 92% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 12.9106741573 85% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 324.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94135802469 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88334879512 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 215.323595506 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.503086419753 0.4932671777 102% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 4.38483146067 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.5626610865 60.3974514979 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.1764705882 118.986275619 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0588235294 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.11764705882 5.21951772744 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 5.13820224719 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177332959832 0.243740707755 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630104358577 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0495523087531 0.0758088955206 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102132594086 0.150359130593 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717518308183 0.0667264976115 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 14.1392134831 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 100.480337079 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.7820224719 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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