The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should consider ways in which the statement might or might not hold true and explain how these considerations shape your position.
Throughout the history, all societies have tried to accomplish a high level well-being to live better. Most of which, consider authorities to lead people achieving that goal. The author of the prompt is of the view that when people control their authority, the well-fare of the society augments. As far as I am concerned, I firmly agree with this idea for two main reasons.
First of all, by questioning the government, most of the nation will be aware how their country’s resources are utilized, because a part of the well-being of a nation depends on its resources. On the other hand, the government will be careful to provide its people’s happiness, extent its power.
Throughout the history, all societies have tried to accomplish a high level well-being to live better. Most of which, consider authorities to lead people achieving that goal. The author of the prompt is of the view that when people control their authority, the well-fare of the society augments. As far as I am concerned, I firmly agree with this idea for two main reasons.
First of all, by questioning the government, most of the nation will be aware how their country’s resources are utilized, because a part of the well-being of a nation depends on its resources. On the other hand, the government will be careful to provide its people’s happiness, extent its power.
Throughout the history, all societies have tried to accomplish a high level well-being to live better. Most of which, consider authorities to lead people achieving that goal. The author of the prompt is of the view that when people control their authority, the well-fare of the society augments. As far as I am concerned, I firmly agree with this idea for two main reasons.
First of all, by questioning the government, most of the nation will be aware how their country’s resources are utilized, because a part of the well-being of a nation depends on its resources. On the other hand, the government will be careful to provide its people’s happiness, extent its power.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, well, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 14.8657303371 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 11.3162921348 106% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 58.6224719101 87% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 2235.4752809 77% => OK
No of words: 342.0 442.535393258 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01754385965 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97040910574 2.79657885939 106% => OK
Unique words: 79.0 215.323595506 37% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.230994152047 0.4932671777 47% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 502.2 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.99550561798 180% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.10617977528 193% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4715431216 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.3333333333 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.66666666667 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220528525578 0.243740707755 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0985479044685 0.0831039109588 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0228278043104 0.0758088955206 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159845538412 0.150359130593 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.031112411148 0.0667264976115 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 48.8420337079 124% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 12.1743820225 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.1639044944 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.01 8.38706741573 72% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 100.480337079 31% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.