The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.
The topic raises the issue that " The well being of society is enhanced when many of its people question authority".
Indisputably, the authority has the final word on the policies/administration or the functioning of the society. It is comprised of the representatives of the people and hence it is considered to work for the betterment of the society. Nevertheless it is not always the case. Absolute power corrupts the mind and hence people have the right to quesion to decisions and seek justifications for everything happening in the society.
First of all, the society is an amalgamation of people and cultures.For the welfare of the entire society, it has to be equally represented in the administrative and decision making bodies. When diverse people come together, their goals and agendas should align with that of societies'. People questioning authority, also question the underlying principal of the policies being formed/implemented. It ensured that all sections of the society are being included and as a whole the society is progressing. To illustrate this let me give you the example of pre independent india when feudal system was practiced. The village administrative bodies only had the landlords in power and this led to more reforms for landlords and the poorer sections of the society were ignored. This was put to an end when the people began to question the decisions of village administration and subsequently after a great struggle feudal system was abolished. This is an apt example to illustrate how people questioning authority can bring in change for the whole society .
Furthermore if we talk about the present scenario in the world, most nations in the world have a democratic or bi party system in which the ruling party is kept in check by the opposition. Those in favour of absolute power might argue that decision making prosess is delayed because of people questioning the authorit. For those i would like to point out that in the parliament most bills, rulings are passed after through cross questioning on the part of the opposition leaders. This gives way to constructive policy making process in which all scenarios are taken into consideration and justified. A lot good has come out of this. The right to Information act has made all the processes transparent and citizens can seek all the information they want. A lot cases of corruption and misadministration has come into light because of the right to information act. In the world forum the united nations, the constant questioning of human rights activists to the authorities about treatment of people caught in war zones esp Syria has led to many humanitarian efforts to better the living conditions of these people.
Admittedly the assumptions that have to be kept in mind is that the right kind of questions have to be asked to the right people. Education of the public on all matters of governance is the first step towards having a constructive policy making/implementing process. A society will not be able to thrive and prosper if the administartion is busy in answering trivial or irrelevant questions. I feel that if authorities are given the freedom to make policies but simultaneously kept in check by constructive criticism and questioning the process, the society will be benefitted the most
Hence although questioning authority seems like a tedious task that slows down the administration, it is necessary to keep the authority in check.As long as proper questions are asked and the objective behind these questions is not to hinder but aid the society, the well being of society will be maintained. In fact the authorities should make it easier for people to raise questions so that they can feel included in the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, if, nevertheless, so, well, as to, i feel, in fact, kind of, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 19.5258426966 169% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 14.8657303371 141% => OK
Relative clauses : 16.0 11.3162921348 141% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 33.0505617978 109% => OK
Preposition: 90.0 58.6224719101 154% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 12.9106741573 163% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3140.0 2235.4752809 140% => OK
No of words: 617.0 442.535393258 139% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08914100486 5.05705443957 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.98392262146 4.55969084622 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18784682537 2.79657885939 114% => OK
Unique words: 279.0 215.323595506 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.452188006483 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 981.9 704.065955056 139% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 6.24550561798 160% => OK
Article: 12.0 4.99550561798 240% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 84.3219474894 60.3974514979 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.769230769 118.986275619 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7307692308 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.26923076923 5.21951772744 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 10.2758426966 117% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 5.13820224719 117% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.83258426966 166% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.37400686484 0.243740707755 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939189123567 0.0831039109588 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116502167578 0.0758088955206 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221536720293 0.150359130593 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.165624976347 0.0667264976115 248% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 14.1392134831 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 48.8420337079 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 12.1743820225 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.1639044944 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.38706741573 99% => OK
difficult_words: 137.0 100.480337079 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.8971910112 76% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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