The well being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority

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The well-being of a society is enhanced when many of its people question authority.

The author of the statement stated that every citizen of a country must ask questions to their authority in order to enhance the well-being of society. Many of us will argue that this will hold all the time will others will counter this. In my essay, I will highlight both the side of the argument and will provide sound reasoning for the same.

The government is responsible for the welfare of society in terms of infrastructure, educations system, Laws, and many more. They should be focused to do so, but sometimes the power government has could make them corrupt. So, it the responsibility of every citizen to ask the question to their government directly or indirectly through a group or organization, but they should ask the question to the authorities.

Furthermore, if the citizens are more vigilant and active in all the policy-making than it will make the government do better work. If in case a government is moving towards the monarchy than the people should revolt against the government to protect their sovereignty. And in countries like China or Saudi, their people should agitate against the government for their freedom because as we know the government should be for the people and with people.

Moreover, great power comes with great responsibility, and the government must follow this. They should maintain transparency in the work of the government and provide accurate information to the public because this will enhance the public trust toward the government.

Last but not the least, the citizen should also understand their responsibility as a citizen of a country by asking the question to their authorities, but they should ask the question with a curiosity to understand the benefit and cons of the government decision or policies. If they ask the question to the government just to criticize them, then this will defeat the real purpose of asking the question. And if the public is not asking a question or subvert someone from doing so just because they support the government, then they are making a great mistake and this will negatively affect the country.

In sum, every citizen has a right to raise their voice or ask the question to the authorities. And as mentioned above they should ask the question not just to criticize them but to make yourself and others also clear about how the policy will make a difference whether negatively or positively in their society.

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Average: 6.6 (1 vote)
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 269, Rule ID: ASK_THE_QUESTION[1]
Message: Use simply 'ask' instead.
Suggestion: ask
... the responsibility of every citizen to ask the question to their government directly or indirec...
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Message: Use simply 'ask' instead.
Suggestion: ask
... group or organization, but they should ask the question to the authorities. Furthermore, if ...
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Line 5, column 133, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ill make the government do better work. If in case a government is moving towards ...
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Line 9, column 110, Rule ID: ASK_THE_QUESTION[1]
Message: Use simply 'asking' instead.
Suggestion: asking
...onsibility as a citizen of a country by asking the question to their authorities, but they should a...
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Message: Use simply 'ask' instead.
Suggestion: ask
...n to their authorities, but they should ask the question with a curiosity to understand the bene...
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Message: Use simply 'ask' instead.
Suggestion: ask
...overnment decision or policies. If they ask the question to the government just to criticize the...
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Message: Use simply 'ask' instead.
Suggestion: ask
...zen has a right to raise their voice or ask the question to the authorities. And as mentioned ab...
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...ies. And as mentioned above they should ask the question not just to criticize them but to make ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 12.4196629213 185% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 14.8657303371 161% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 11.3162921348 18% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 33.0505617978 106% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 58.6224719101 84% => OK
Nominalization: 30.0 12.9106741573 232% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2015.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 404.0 442.535393258 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98762376238 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.48327461151 4.55969084622 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81502904787 2.79657885939 101% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 215.323595506 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.428217821782 0.4932671777 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 615.6 704.065955056 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 8.0 1.77640449438 450% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.893483153 60.3974514979 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.9375 118.986275619 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.25 23.4991977007 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.21951772744 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 7.80617977528 102% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.83258426966 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152380753013 0.243740707755 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0606923257764 0.0831039109588 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674952755171 0.0758088955206 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0829020499156 0.150359130593 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428718453054 0.0667264976115 64% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 14.1392134831 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 48.8420337079 112% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 12.1743820225 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.1639044944 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.38706741573 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 100.480337079 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.8971910112 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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