When someone achieves greatness in any field such as the arts, science, politics, or business that person’s achievements are more important than any of his or her personal faults.
There is a well-known saying, “A coin has two sides” which means If there is something positive, there is negative too. Likewise, Every person is born with virtues and flaws. However, if a person achieved remarkably with relentless effort, the world praises its effort ignoring the faults. The following example explains how faults are ignored over achievements.
Studies show your social life has an impact on your professional life. But, many scholars refute this belief. For instance, The prime minister of India, Narendra Modi has tremendous achievement in the field of politics. From a street-side tea seller to the prime minister of India. His journey from tea seller to the prime minister is full of ups and downs. Though, Being the Prime Minister, he has lots of issues in his personal life. He got divorced and started ascetic life, but all such complications didn’t hamper his career. People respect him disregarding his personal life issues. Thus, like Narendra Modi, if people have the audacity and will to achieve to touch the sky, the world will accept you as you are.
The field of art depicts numerous examples of talent. Have anyone thought what brings creativity in the artist? The art of singers, painters shows there is a story behind their art. The famous painter cannot work unless he is stoned. The critics praise the art without thinking he is the greatest addict. Similarly, Once high school boy was cheated and was heart-broken, in grief he started composing music. Now, the world loves his composition, but the composer has some psychotic person.
The famous writer of Harry Potter, ‘ J.K. Rowling ‘ is praised for her work for decades. But, In her childhood, she had faced physical abuse which made her introvert. However, the world knows her through her writings and no one can even think. If she wouldn’t have written harry potter people might criticize her saying a timid person. But, the world just lauds her.
People will blindly love, praise the achievement by ignoring the minute flaws until it is gross. Suppose, A painter has some psychological illness and likes to hurt other people by physically or mentally abusing them, Such an act should not be tolerated. Thus, Since decades there are numerous instances which proved achievement is the greatest ornament which hides all the flaws.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, likewise, regarding, similarly, so, thus, well, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 19.5258426966 92% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 14.8657303371 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 33.0505617978 88% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 58.6224719101 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1956.0 2235.4752809 87% => OK
No of words: 387.0 442.535393258 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05426356589 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.55969084622 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5056739757 2.79657885939 90% => OK
Unique words: 236.0 215.323595506 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609819121447 0.4932671777 124% => OK
syllable_count: 580.5 704.065955056 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 13.0 4.99550561798 260% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 3.10617977528 129% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 28.0 20.2370786517 138% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 23.0359550562 56% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.1165847964 60.3974514979 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 69.8571428571 118.986275619 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.8214285714 23.4991977007 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.78571428571 5.21951772744 53% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 7.80617977528 77% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 10.2758426966 97% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203615353012 0.243740707755 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0497016394437 0.0831039109588 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0380723972302 0.0758088955206 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101089888413 0.150359130593 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0160694352432 0.0667264976115 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 14.1392134831 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 48.8420337079 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 12.1743820225 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.1639044944 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 107.0 100.480337079 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.8971910112 46% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 11.2143820225 64% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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