Some people believe that children should be allowed to stay at home and play until they are six or seven years old. Others believe that it is important for young children to go to school as soon as possible.
What do you think are the advantages of attending school from a young age?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
How children are raised? When do they go to school? Is it right to send them to the nursery or not? There are many questions that bother parents concerning their children. Since people care a lot about their young, they think a lot about how to best raise them. One main argument that they consider is when it is suitable to send them to be educated. Some parents believe that it is better sending them when they are mature enough to take care of themselves. Other parents deem that sending them as soon as possible is more beneficial.
Those who think sending their children when they are six or s...
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