Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Some people involve many activities in their daily life. Although many people prefer to do the similar things and avoid challenge, I would argue that there are some positive sides to change our daily activities. This essay will discuss the main issue.
Firstly, many people choose to live with their own same activities because they feel really enjoy. Passion became the the strongest reason why people could stay doing the same activities. People could dedicate full-time in the same place because of passion. They could work passionately because they realize to do the best in their one-life tim...
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Sentence: Passion became the the strongest reason why people could stay doing the same activities.
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Sentence: When young men became a father, he must provided good living standard both for his wife and their children.
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Sentence: For example, if a company-worker want to be entrepreneur they must travel to find new places and to acquire new skills.
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