Book-7
You have recently started work in a new company. Write a letter to an English-speaking friend. In your letter
- explain why you changed jobs
- describe your new job
- tell him/her your other news
Dear John,
After a long time, I got a chance to write a letter to you. Because currently I am working in a new place and I feel more comfortable with my new job. Hope you’re doing good. You have shared nice photos in Facebook and congratulation for your new house.
My new job place is situated very close to my house. Therefore I can save travel free. This is a big relief for me as my previous job did not pay well and all the money gone for transport. On the other hand, as I have been working there in more than five years, the work is not challengeable to me now.
I really like my new job. Furthermore, I can save money for future. This place is a good friendly environment. The work is more challenge. I have a change to learn new technologies and software tools. Plus, I am getting additional facilities like free packet of lunch daily.
Furthermore, I am getting a promotion on next month. Hope to hear from you soon.
Your faithfully,
John
The work is more challenge
The work has more challenges
Sentence: Hope you're doing good.
Description: The fragment doing good . is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace good with adverb
Sentence: On the other hand, as I have been working there in more than five years, the work is not challengeable to me now.
Error: challengeable Suggestion: No alternate word
flaws:
Avg. Sentence Length: 9.474 21.0
More compound or complex sentences wanted.
Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.5 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 2 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 1 2
No. of Sentences: 19 10
No. of Words: 180 200
No. of Characters: 743 1000
No. of Different Words: 107 100
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 3.663 4.0
Average Word Length: 4.128 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.55 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 35 60
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 25 50
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 20 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 15 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 9.474 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.193 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.368 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.306 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.59 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.078 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 4