Book 8 Test-A
Today, more people are traveling than ever before.
Why is this the case? What are the benefits of travelling for the traveler?
Today countries economy got increased due to tourism. Today people are travelling than before. As a result of tourism there is a vast improvement on country economy, hotel industry, education and technology. People travel to experience on new modern aspects such as to experience in foreign country life styles, to taste different foods, to see other historical places like Museum.
Today people are very busy with their office work and it is hard to survive without money. Therefore they will think of travel away from home and to separate from day to day life at least for a short period of time. So they will forget the normal life and try to stay with their family in relax. People really want to stay in peacefully and enjoy their time maximum. Therefore they will think by travelling is a good solution. While travelling we can make a new relationship with other foreign countries. Not only that, we can learn our own history by visiting to our historical places such as museum.
In Sri lanka, we can see such a nice places. Sri Lanka called as Paradise and there are such as nice places to visit as sigiriya,Ruwanvalisaya tample, Kala River and more. We can study new things like technology and plus we can be more knowledgeable person in many areas. IF we travel we can learn how to cook western food as traditional foods and we can taste food at the same time. We can gather knowledge throw internet but we cannot experience in real environment. So it will help to remember every things easily than learn through books. It’s good for children knowledge as well.
In sum up, we can gather knowledge while travelling. It’s good for children and they can learn fast about other what is happening around the world.
Sentence: Today countries economy got increased due to tourism.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to countries and economy
Sentence: People really want to stay in peacefully and enjoy their time maximum.
Description: The fragment in peacefully and is rare
Suggestion: Possible agreement error: Replace peacefully with adjective
they will think by travelling is a good solution.
they will think that travelling is a good solution.
Sentence: So it will help to remember every things easily than learn through books.
Description: A conjunction, subordinating is not usually followed by a verb, base: uninflected present, imperative or infinitive
Suggestion: Refer to than and learn
Sentence: It's good for children knowledge as well.
Description: A noun, plural, common is not usually followed by a noun, singular, common
Suggestion: Refer to children and knowledge
Sentence: It's good for children and they can learn fast about other what is happening around the world.
Description: A determiner/pronoun, post-determiner is not usually followed by a WH-determiner
Suggestion: Refer to other and what
we can see such a nice places
we can see such a nice place
we can see such nice places
flaws:
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
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Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 7 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 20 15
No. of Words: 302 350
No. of Characters: 1387 1500
No. of Different Words: 161 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.169 4.7
Average Word Length: 4.593 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.43 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 87 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 54 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 39 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 29 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 15.1 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 6.016 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.7 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.31 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.483 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.171 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5