average percentages of sodium, surated fats, and added sugars in typhical meals consumed in the USA
The information which is illustrated by the pie charts is about the typical meals in average percentage with kinds of nutrients, where when if consumed to much is unhealthy. Overall, it is seen from the diagram that in the USA all of the nutrients is eaten more and becoming the highest number of percentage at the dinner. While that the smallest is breakfast.
For the first diagram show that the figure of sodium in breakfast is more than a tenth, where it is similar with number of sodium in snacks. Then in the lunch the amount is less than a third as well as the sodium in the dinner reach a biggest percentage is 43%. Beside that, the saturated fat also has a largest number in the dinner is slight less than a two-fifth, after that in breakfast just above a tenth which is becoming the lowest figure. At the lunch is 26% and snacks is under the amount of lunch.
Then the last pie describe that the snacks is the biggest percentage of added sugar, and such the others that the breakfast as the smallest figure of percentage. Finally, number of lunch slightly more than breakfast is 19%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, if, so, then, third, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 7.0 229% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 902.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 199.0 196.424390244 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53266331658 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4203062568 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.482412060302 0.547539520022 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 266.4 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2815997131 43.030603864 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.222222222 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1111111111 22.9334400587 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 5.23603664747 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167225104774 0.215688989381 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0620107987336 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0610901689021 0.0843802449381 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116646091785 0.15604864568 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453716271209 0.0819641961636 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.2329268293 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.53 61.2550243902 122% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.99 11.4140731707 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.