The average standard of people's health is likely to be lower in the future than it is now. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
These days, there has been an increase in the quality of living condition within the society and there are those who say that health among the individuals is greater in the upcoming years than it is today. However, I predominantly disagree as the health standard is predetermined according to the ongoing crisis in the world.
It is explicably true that more people are being more conscious now and it was before. This is due to the ill-effects that they see as a threat due to their poor habits and that with them subscribing to certain lifestyle modifications. As such, fitness enthusiasts have subscribed themselves to regular exercise, proper diet with organic foods and daily consultations with there attending physicians which they see as a good investment to achieve optimum level of health and wellness.
However, with the current situation in the world, people are more exposed to environmental hazard. The ongoing pollution has given enough space for carbon excess to be stored within the atmosphere thus, aggravates global warming. Recently, wildfires have spread in most of the regions in the amazon rainforest due to the increasing temperature of the planet which has caused global hiatus as it further endangers the ecosystem as a whole.
Furthermore, a variety of infectious diseases have been found to be difficult to treat due to the increased level of immunity by many infections to antibiotic therapy. The development of multiple drug resistant bacterias have made first generation antibacterial medicines to be ineffective. As a result, more and more people are becoming prone to these communicable infections which can certainly affect those who are less fortunate and cannot afford treatment.
As a whole, although there are some who are of the belief that the health standard is greater than it is now, I am of the view that it is going to more of the opposite. Even if they are conscious about their body, biomedical and environmental hazards will continue to pose as threats to humanity.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, so, thus, well, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 7.0 329% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 3.15609756098 380% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 26.0 5.60731707317 464% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 965.302439024 176% => OK
No of words: 330.0 196.424390244 168% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.16060606061 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 3.73543355544 114% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92453130933 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 106.607317073 173% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557575757576 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 283.868780488 189% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 1.07073170732 467% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.9521770869 43.030603864 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.3846153846 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.61538461538 5.23603664747 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.13902439024 527% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117802637367 0.215688989381 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0427501333282 0.103423049105 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299949172489 0.0843802449381 36% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.063987684874 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0194506149866 0.0819641961636 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.2329268293 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 10.3012195122 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 11.4140731707 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 40.7170731707 243% => Less difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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