The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics.

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The table below shows social and economic indicators for four countries in 1994, according to United Nations statistics.

The table depicts information on the four indicators of social and economic status for Canada, Japan, Peru and Zaire. The study covers the year of 1994.

In general, the country with the highest income per person and life expectancy at birth was Japan while Zaire was the least. However, Canada had the highest daily calorie supply per person while both Canadians and Japanese had mostly had the biggest percentage for adult literacy rate.

As per survey made by the United Nations statistics, the annual income of Japan per person was 15,760 dollars which exceeded Canada’s yearly income by 4,060 dollars per individual. This was followed by Peru and Zaire with 160 dollars and 130 dollars, respectively. Similar ranking was observed for life expectancy at birth where Japan placed first at 78 years old as opposing to that for Zaire which was ranked last at 47 years old.

Concurrently, the highest daily calorie supply per person was seen among Canadians with 3,326 calories supplied per person while Zaire recorded the least with 1,749 calories taken per individual. Meanwhile, both Canadians and Japanese had 99 % literacy rate as opposed to the other two nations with 68 % and 34 %. By comparison, the adult literacy rate of Canada and Japan was three folds higher than that of Zaire.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, while, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 965.302439024 114% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1261682243 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43876784643 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542056074766 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.042640232 43.030603864 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.7 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1 5.23603664747 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.116517966923 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0573235769165 0.103423049105 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813362312371 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104809330655 0.15604864568 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112367061897 0.0819641961636 137% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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