There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.
What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem?
There is a significant increase in the level of global warming brought about by industrialization. Certain causes have brought about this rise which are mostly made by men. However, there proactive measures that can be made to address this issue.
The long decades of man-made actions like deforestation have lead the lands in most of the planets region to experience degradation. This resulted in soil erosion making the lands infertile. Aside from this, a lot of factories have been established which emit gas fumes from fuels that add up to the greenhouse effect. These contribute to the continuous rise in carbon excess which destroys the ozone layer permitting the ultraviolet rays of the sun to heat up the earth. For instance, there is an ongoing wildfire that affects a bigger portion of the Amazon in South Africa which jeopardized the health of its inhabitants. This is a very alarming incident as the rainforest plays a critical role in ecological balance.
However, this can be prevented if each individual develops a sense of environmental awareness. The government in every country has to initiate programs that disseminates information on ways to protect the planet. In addition, those in the private sectors need to develop innovative strategies that are environmental friendly as this aids in reducing the detrimental effects of modernization. For instance, many corporate companies are now subscribing to certain causes such as clean-up drive and tree planting which help in the restoration and preservation of the environment.
As a whole, the increasing temperature in the earth’s atmosphere has been caused by human actions. However, effective ways can be instituted to aid in the rehabilitation of the planet.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 92, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'planets'' or 'planet's'?
Suggestion: planets'; planet's
...tion have lead the lands in most of the planets region to experience degradation. This ...
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Line 9, column 578, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...on and preservation of the environment. As a whole, the increasing temperature i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, as to, for instance, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.34782608696 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15651874476 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605072463768 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.323451073 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.4 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172462052452 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552695742907 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490577108217 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104141192735 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0490238622909 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.75 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.74 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.