The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.

The pie graph illustrates the anticipated proportions of the market share of two corporations in jeans while the bar graph compares the expected sales (thousands of pairs) between them, in Turkey, next year.
Overall, the sales of jeans in both companies are estimated to increase next year. Besides, the market share of them is forecast to account for 50%.
In the bar chart, the jeans sales of Jack & Jones and Mango are calculated to decrease from around 450,000 and 150,000 pairs (January) to nearly 250,000 and 100,000 pairs (February), respectively. The sales of Jack & Jones are anticipated to rise continuously from 150,000 pairs (February) to just above 400,000 pairs (June) and will maintain this figure until August before reaching a peak of 900,000 pairs (December). Besides, the sales of Mango also are predicted to grow quickly from 100,000 pairs (February) to just below 500,000 pairs, which will overpass the number of Jack & Jones in August, and will reach just over 600,000 pairs (December).
The market share of Mango and Jack & Jones is expected to occupy 20% and 30% next year, respectively.

Votes
Average: 8.4 (2 votes)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, so, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 181.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05524861878 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66791821706 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52620452 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.519337016575 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.3377567123 43.030603864 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.714285714 112.824112599 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8571428571 22.9334400587 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42857142857 5.23603664747 65% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227485503185 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148841188124 0.103423049105 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.12569726785 0.0843802449381 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.211041191403 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114808006308 0.0819641961636 140% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.06136585366 92% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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