The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the estimated sales of jeans for two companies next year in Turkey. The pie chart shows the projected market share of the two companies in jeans at the end of next year.

The bar chart illustrate the estimation sales of jeans between mango co. and Jack&Jones co. next year in Turkey, and pie chart elucidate the projection of market share among them in jeans at the new of next year. Overall, Jack&Jones co. should estimate as the highest number of jeans sales in 10 months, and mango co. might be predicted as the uppermost in July and august.

Furthermore, in January Jack&Jones co and mango co. was estimated enable for gaining the number of jeans sales up to 400,000 and 100,000 of pairs respectively. In contrast, in February the number of jeans sales of Jack&Jones tends to decline significantly up to 200,000 of pairs, while mango co. leans to decrease minimally.

On the other hand, during March to june the number of jeans sales of Jack&Jones co gravitates to uplift slightly which it reached 400,000 of pairs in june. In another sides, mango co. was indicated leans to escalate since april to august significantly, from 100,000s of pears in april to 500,000s of pears in august. Incredibly, throughout august to december the number of jeans sales of Jacke&Jones co had predicted leans to uplift extremely which it attained more than 900,000s of pairs in december, while the number of jeans sales of mango co tends to stable since august to November.

Finally, the pie chart elucidates that throughout the year Jack&Jones co and mango co had predicted enable gained 30% and 20% of market shares of jeans sales respectively.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 258, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ince april to august significantly, from 100,000s of pears in april to 500,000s o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, if, while, in contrast, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 33.7804878049 172% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1224.0 965.302439024 127% => OK
No of words: 247.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95546558704 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72702645343 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 111.0 106.607317073 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.449392712551 0.547539520022 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 67.4800382006 43.030603864 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.6 112.824112599 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4666666667 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.2 5.23603664747 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213405761702 0.215688989381 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.088979228308 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.128792679648 0.0843802449381 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173398554799 0.15604864568 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.113049618013 0.0819641961636 138% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.2329268293 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 11.4140731707 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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