Nowadays many business meetings and training are happening online and not in real offices. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages in this matter?

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Nowadays many business meetings and training are happening online and not in real offices. Do you think advantages outweigh the disadvantages in this matter?

In the modern era, most of the companies utilize skype and streaming apps for doing meeting and training by online. One important aspect of this reality is giving the feasibility for everyone to attend the meeting and training everywhere. In my views, I believe that there are a plethora of online meeting and training than their disadvantages. I hold these views for some reasons which are set out below.

To begin with, I would like to reckon that online meeting and training are cost less than conventional meeting and training. By online meeting and training, most of the companies are not burdened to rent the meeting room and preserving plentiful accommodations for their members. Therefore, the data from World Bank showed that nowadays most of the companies that implement online system enable to treamline the company budget tremendously.

On the other hand, online meeting and training are more flexible as caused they could be held in everytime. Furthermore, a survey which held by Research Centre for Digital Communication the University of Melbourne stated that 70% of companies in Tokyo are held an online meeting at 6 am while most of the members are still fresh.

In contrast, some peoples perceive that there are some disadvantages which had made by online meeting and training, such as they lean to risky to get the trouble connections and blackouts. However, most of the companies already have an alternative system for protecting the troubles and blackouts, such as utilizing a portable solar system and Mini Wifi connections.

Taking everything into considerations, I believe that online meeting and training are contributing more positive impacts than their negatives.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, in contrast, such as, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1431.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26102941176 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87604116472 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547794117647 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5841683283 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.25 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197277665395 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0844214123012 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0456215282989 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114115787183 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0390438239185 0.056905535591 69% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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