the bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
The bar graph demonstrates that the comparison of the Australian doing regular physical activity by genders in different age groups in 2010.
It is clear that the collected data about local residences were separated into 6 different age group with genders. Overall, the activity preference for Female was more than that for the man in the year.
First, the youngest male(15-24) group have most wiliness on sports, which led to the ratio of them reaching the peak(52.8%), while the figures decreased across the right of the chart(when they become elder), and bottomed 39.5% in the third group(35-44). At the meantime, the number of females revealed opposite changing tendency within the first three groups. The data grew from 47.7% to 52.5%(nearly the highest number).
Then, the number gap between genders become more narrow with age due to the growth in the number of males and the drop of the female regular sports population. The proportion stood at 43.1% and 53.3% for man and woman respectively, who belonged to the 45-54 age group in 2010, respectively. In the last group(older than 65), the percentage of such sports population of males(46.7%) was similar to the females’ ratio(47.1%).
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then, third, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 991.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 194.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.10824742268 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73207559907 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70912947386 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 106.607317073 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623711340206 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 284.4 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.3716067751 43.030603864 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.111111111 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5555555556 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.66666666667 5.23603664747 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22222355365 0.215688989381 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889500491741 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122852564822 0.0843802449381 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166115565761 0.15604864568 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.149943810488 0.0819641961636 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.75 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 40.7170731707 123% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.