The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar illustrates the difference with six groups of age doing regular physical activity by Australians in 2010.
It can be seen from the bar chart, in the first three groups of age, the age from 15 to 24 remained the biggest sex on doing regular physical activity, whereas the percentage of Australian gence in group 55 to 64 in the last three groups was the most popular. In the whole comparison, the figure of men doing regular physical activity was noticeable to women was, apart from the group 15 to 24.
To begin with, in the first three groups of age, the highest proportion went on the group age from 15 to 24, which the figure of male and female went up by 52.8% and 47.7% respectively. Meanwhile, the group 35 to 44 was also considerable, within female's percentage reached to 52.5%. Besides, the largest percentage of doing regular activity belonged to 55 to 64, the number of Australian men and women in this group respectively went on 45.1% and 53%.
On the other hand, there was a significant attention in the difference from the proportion of men and women doing regular physical activity in 2010. Female almost did regular physical activity much more than male from the age 25 to over 65. By contrast, in group 15 to 24, the figure of male was noticeable than one.

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Average: 6.7 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, first, if, so, whereas, while, apart from, to begin with, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1055.0 965.302439024 109% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.60698689956 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59808079865 2.65546596893 98% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.445414847162 0.547539520022 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 316.8 283.868780488 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 8.0 4.33902439024 184% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.1109970339 43.030603864 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.222222222 112.824112599 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4444444444 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 5.23603664747 191% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.417725942492 0.215688989381 194% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.203305632023 0.103423049105 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.115436920888 0.0843802449381 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.311706188586 0.15604864568 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0788310104908 0.0819641961636 96% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.2329268293 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.06136585366 86% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 11.4329268293 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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