the bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where possible
The given bar chart illustrates the proportion of Australian men and women among varied age group (from 15 years to more than 65 years) , who were regularly involved in physical activity in 2010.
Overall, In 2010, it can be clearly seen that females are physically active than male in all ages except 15-24 age group. Among women 55-64 age group is relatively active, while in male’s 15-24 age group is more active than other age groups. Least involved group is male’s of 35-44 age group.
Female’s show higher participation in activities compared to men, whereas exception was recorded in 15-24 age group where women are 5% less active than men. Female’s maximum involvement is seen in 55-64 group with 53% and minimum involvement documented in 65 and over with 47.1%.
Male’s are considerably less involved in physical activity except 15-24 age group where 52.8% participation was seen. In addition, 35-44 age group of men are the overall least involved group with only 39.5% participation. In 65 and above group both men and women have similar percentage (47%).
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Consider using the plural form here: 'Males'.
Suggestion: Males
...ocumented in 65 and over with 47.1%. Male’s are considerably less involved in physi...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
whereas, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 33.7804878049 80% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 903.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 177.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10169491525 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62763445333 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542372881356 0.547539520022 99% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.8072516503 43.030603864 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.333333333 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6666666667 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 5.23603664747 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.287130377321 0.215688989381 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148030822335 0.103423049105 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0680487931766 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210194873545 0.15604864568 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0442017875626 0.0819641961636 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 11.4140731707 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.06136585366 98% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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