The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Essay topics:

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The given bar chart illustrates the amount of electricity generation and utilization of ten distinct countries, recorded in 2014.

Overall, it is clear that all nations produced more electricity than consuming, except for Germany. In addition, Chinese and American energy far outnumbered others in both generating and using.

In the given year, the amount of electricity manufactured and consumed in China was nearly the same at around 5,000 billion kWh, ranked the highest place in the world. The following position was taken by the USA whose production was 1000 billion kWh less than China. The remaining nation in the group with over 1,000 billion kWh generation was Russia due to the fact that Russian created 1,057 and utilized roughly 1,038 billion kWh respectively.

Concerning other countries, Japan had the highest figure of production of 936.2 billion kWh, doubled that of Korea. India and Canada followed Japan with approximately 100 billion kWh less in both categories. The consumption of Brazil and France was similar, standing at about 400 billion kWh in usage. Germany was the only odd, caused by several billions kWh used more than generated.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
except for, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 983.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31351351351 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71389035824 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621621621622 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 289.8 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8942000997 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.3 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.3 5.23603664747 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109103616962 0.215688989381 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0503379636847 0.103423049105 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0730080196012 0.0843802449381 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0964173281008 0.15604864568 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.091228934695 0.0819641961636 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 11.4140731707 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.06136585366 113% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 40.7170731707 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 11.4329268293 79% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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