The given bar chart represents the information about using electricity for production and consumption in top ten countries in 2014. The types of countries are divided into China, United States, Russia, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea Republic. Overall, it is clear from the chart that China was the first rank for producing and consuming electricity, while Korea Republic was the last countries in both.
It is apparent that production of electricity was higher than consumption of electricity in every country except Germany. The figures of China and United States were the largest amount at around 5000 billion kWh and approximately 4000 billion kWh, respectively. In contrast, Korea Republic produced and consumed electricity at roughly 500 billion kWh, in which was the lowest amount in ten countries. Other interesting, the figure of Germany had different from the others, consumption of electricity in Germany was slightly bigger than production of electricity, at nearly 60 billion kWh.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 866.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.51592356688 4.92477711251 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90526863215 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585987261146 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 20.4010804036 43.030603864 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 123.714285714 112.824112599 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4285714286 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.14285714286 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211802144815 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117251574784 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.11789329839 0.0843802449381 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175394163272 0.15604864568 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478241147389 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 61.2550243902 66% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 10.3012195122 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 11.4140731707 132% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 8.06136585366 111% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.