The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The bar chart below illustrates the electricity consumption and production of 10 particular nations in 2014. It can be clearly seen from the chart that china had the biggest production and consumption of electricity in this period of time.
According to the bar chart, china ‘s electricity production was the highest with just under 5500 billion kwh while us came next with 4099 billion kwh. In addition, russia, japan and Canada were much far behind with average 900 billion kwh per countries. Moreover, Cananda, France, Brazil, Germany and Korea had approximately 500 billion kwh in particular countries and this figure was about 8 time as low as the highest.
Meanwhile, the consumption of electricity had the similar pattern. china and United States came top with above 5300 and 3800 billion kwh respectively. Furthermore, russia used over 1000 whereas japan use 850 billion kwh in this period of time.Finally, the others consumed approximately 500 billion kwh per nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, furthermore, moreover, whereas, while, in addition, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 831.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 157.0 196.424390244 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29299363057 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53976893118 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88506206291 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.611464968153 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.249113464 43.030603864 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.875 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.625 22.9334400587 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 5.23603664747 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210693051863 0.215688989381 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.119463926196 0.103423049105 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136408219733 0.0843802449381 162% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.178209944277 0.15604864568 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.145787664009 0.0819641961636 178% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.2329268293 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 11.4140731707 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.3 8.06136585366 103% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.