Some People Think That Universities Should Provide Graduates with the Knowledge and Skills Needed in the Workplace. Others Think That the True Function of a University Should Be to Give Access to Knowledge for Its Own
Colleagues should gain only the major knowledge or train the work place skill for students is a hot topic for debate. However, many people believe that an university should be to give knowledge access , I convinced that it should provide graduates not only knowledge but also skill in work environment .
Firstly, it’s true that main function of a university is extend major knowledge for students. Everyone need the knowledge of their major so universities are very helpful for them to get a job. it must be hard for a people who doesn’t have any ideal about something to get a dream job. In addition, if a graduate doesn’t receive useful lesson from their university, they will find it difficult to work and it is impossible for them to study master or PHD.
In contrast, it is seem like that graduates need some basic skills to catch their work more easily than knowledge. Mechanical engineering is an example. This job require design skill, English skill, manufacture skill that are more important than everything candidate learned from school. More over, work skill is the most important in university training to help students find a suitable job instead of focus on some jobs which they can apply their major knowledge. Last but not lead, work place skill can make a student become a master in some work and success in their life. university knowledge is not enough for a graduates who want to be a successful person, they need more and more skill like computer skills, how to deal with the customer ….
In conclusion, I argued that work place improvement should be encourage while many people want the university should be to give access knowledge
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, while, in addition, in conclusion, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93639575972 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66253141974 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526501766784 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.9931441807 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.461538462 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7692307692 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.92307692308 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.386621009803 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1503426233 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121356925135 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276047471099 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0916276191517 0.056905535591 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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