The bar chart shows the number of times per week (in 1000s), over 5 weeks, that three computer packages were downloaded from the Internet.
The bar chart illustrates the number of times that ActiveX, Java and Net were downloaded from the Internet in five weeks. At first glance, it is evident that Net package had the highest number of downloading times.
At the week 1, ActiveX was downloaded approximately 30 times and the figure for Java only had just over 40 times, whereas the number of times downloading Net package was double higher than ActiveX package. The number of times which ActiveX was downloaded gradually decreased to 20 times at the week 2 and around 10 times at the week 3. Conversely, the figure for Java and Net rapidly rose.
At the week 4, the number of times downloading Net fell to just under 100 times, whereas the figure for AcitveX started to considerably grow to 40 times and the figure for Java increased steadily. At the week 5, Net package was downloaded at near 120 times, significantly increasing. The figures for ActiveX and Java continuously rose to 50 times and over 80 times respectively.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...figure for Java and Net rapidly rose. At the week 4, the number of times downl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
conversely, first, if, whereas
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 830.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85380116959 4.92477711251 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71844921664 2.65546596893 102% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.473684210526 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 254.7 283.868780488 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1946212258 43.030603864 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.75 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.375 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.75 5.23603664747 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.294468623738 0.215688989381 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160812200856 0.103423049105 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.112827438946 0.0843802449381 134% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.249955788116 0.15604864568 160% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0825884746147 0.0819641961636 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.85 11.4140731707 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 40.7170731707 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.