The bar graph below shows the literacy levels of males and females in rural and urban India in 2013 2015 and 2017

Essay topics:

The bar graph below shows the literacy levels of males and females in rural and urban India in 2013, 2015 and 2017.

The given bar graph represents how the literacy levels in urban and rural areas of India changed in men and female in 2013, 2015 and 2017.

The bar graph shows that men are significantly better in writing and reading. The smallest disparity between men and female literacy level appears to be in urban areas. The biggest difference in literacy is between urban male and rural female.

Firstly, during 2013 - 30,62 percent female could read and write in rural areas while in the same year almost double amount of men - 57.87 percent were literate. In two years female literacy level significantly rose there were 46.13 percent women literate while in 2015 men level rose to 70.7 percent. Secondly, in 2017 women literacy level kept rising and reached 57.93 %, the male level four years ago.

On the other hand, in urban areas both genders are more literate with 81.09 percent male and women 64.05 in 2013. Male literacy level in cities was pretty much steady, rising by 5 percent in first two years period and by 2 percent in next 2 years period. Female level rose more significantly, in 2015 to 72.86 percent and in 2017 reached 79,11 percent. As a result female in urban areas became more literate than male in rural areas in 2017.

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Average: 8.6 (7 votes)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...cent and in 2017 reached 79,11 percent. As a result female in urban areas became m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, while, as a result, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1025.0 965.302439024 106% => OK
No of words: 214.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78971962617 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2081860678 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 309.6 283.868780488 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0091484464 43.030603864 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.1818181818 112.824112599 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4545454545 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.81818181818 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.451523718716 0.215688989381 209% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.197576078209 0.103423049105 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123993658409 0.0843802449381 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.341881466073 0.15604864568 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13376449572 0.0819641961636 163% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.2329268293 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 11.4140731707 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.09 8.06136585366 88% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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