Having more money and less free time is better than earning less money and having more free time. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
One of the factors which determinates our life is money we earn, one earning more holds more likely expensive habits like going to fancy restaurants, traveling or buying known brand clothing. The ones who are choosing to work less and consequently earn less has more time for themselves. I respect their choice to sacrifice stability over time spent with family and people you love.
Humans who are seeking wealth and together bigger capital, as we know, works hard and long hours. Often they do not have free time as much because their work has become biggest part of the life and often as a lifestyle. However, they can provide a better life for their children. Often the need of being wealthy follows fancy habits which not necessarily give fulfilment.
Human beings who consciously decides to work less, like four days per week or just having regular 7,7/8 hours per day job, leaves them more time to live their life, time for hobbies. Moreover, I believe persons choosing live over work has more creative and alternative lifestyle. However, not everything is so perfect when it comes to the pay check day and retirement.
I strongly believe that our time is the most expensive that you can not exchange into money. I prefer life and work balance. Living life and having ability to share my time with family and friends. I elect to have fun than all the money without ability to experience life in all its colours. I think money can not give happiness, humans needs first shelter, food that can be bought by money. You can not buy love, fulfilment and friendship.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 163, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'become the biggest'.
Suggestion: become the biggest
...ree time as much because their work has become biggest part of the life and often as a lifesty...
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Line 4, column 221, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to live'
Suggestion: to live
...s. Moreover, I believe persons choosing live over work has more creative and alterna...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, however, if, moreover, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 41.998997996 55% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.79044117647 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39522834747 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595588235294 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 406.8 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.0300180333 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.4375 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4375 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295025243394 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0835347980406 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775283439852 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.167610815949 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568935431755 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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