Two proposed sites, S1 and S2, will be used for building a new shopping mall at Brandfield city.
Adjacent to the City Center, both of the proposed sites are enclosed by a railway, passing through center of the city, and a connecting road. Therefore, both places will be easily accessible either by train or car. City planners are able to choose the places distant from the golf course and the park. They try to isolate the park from the noise of the shopping mall.
Both of these places have strategic differences in terms of location. Situating near the housing estate, the S1 site will be easily accessible for household residents. This site is also far away from the industrial site, keeping the mall free from industrial pollution. Although, the S1 site will definitely pollute the nearby river, the S2 site, situated far away from the river-flow, will not harm the river.
In summary, both of the proposed sites have benefit of being easily accessible by train and car. While both sites are isolated from the park and the golf course, S1 may cause to pollute the river and S2 may be affected by industrial pollution.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...he mall free from industrial pollution. Although, this site may cause to pollute the nea...
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Line 3, column 300, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'polluting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: polluting
...ollution. Although, this site may cause to pollute the nearby river. In contrast, the S2 s...
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Line 4, column 176, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'polluting'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'cause' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: polluting
... park and the golf course, S1 may cause to pollute the river and S2 may be affected by ind...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, so, therefore, while, in contrast, in summary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 1.00243902439 698% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 946.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 200.0 196.424390244 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.73 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43721152139 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 105.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 26.3596914499 43.030603864 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8333333333 112.824112599 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 22.9334400587 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144628684434 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0614297720106 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0715155155642 0.0843802449381 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122268256289 0.15604864568 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0933395263633 0.0819641961636 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.2329268293 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 61.2550243902 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.3012195122 82% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.86 11.4140731707 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.