The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nation statistics

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The chart below gives information about birth and death rates in Switzerland from 1970 to 2020 according to United Nation statistics.

The charts illustrate the information about birth and death rates in Switzerland in a period from 1970 to present, and predict figures until 2030.
Overall, the birth rate have risen significantly since 1970 and is predicted to continue its growth in 2020-2030, while the mortality rate achieved a peak and started a gradual decline.
At the beginning of the period, the fertility level was approximately 1.2 million, whereas the mortality rate’s figure was precisely 1 million. In 1980, the figures for the birth rate did not change, but the mortality rose by 300 thousand, thus becoming dominant over fertility.
However, the trend changed in 1990, when the birth rate surpassed the number of death and started its moderate increase by roughly 0.25-0.5 million per decade. It has recently reached the level of slightly under 3 million and is expected to reach 3.2 newborns in 2020-2030. The mortality rate peaked 1.5 million in 1990 and started a fall. The figure is predicted to reach 0.8 million in 2020-2030.

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Average: 8.9 (2 votes)

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 31, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , &nbsp
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, thus, whereas, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 164.0 196.424390244 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32317073171 4.92477711251 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99138038921 2.65546596893 113% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621951219512 0.547539520022 114% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 283.868780488 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6666458333 43.030603864 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.125 112.824112599 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 22.9334400587 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.75 5.23603664747 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225483504522 0.215688989381 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105199933638 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10435665144 0.0843802449381 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16825175268 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117284210925 0.0819641961636 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.2329268293 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.4140731707 119% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.06136585366 108% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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