The chart below gives information about trends in internet use by females in the USA in two years.
The chart shows that the percetage of females uses the Internet between 2000 and 2001 for different age groups in the USA.
For the year 2000, It can be shown that the proportion of females who use the Internet rose dramtatically for age group 12-15 to 90%. There was a slight fall in the for age group 16-18 just under the 90%. The same kind of flow can be seen between the age group 19-24, 25-35 and 36-45, 46-55 at 80%, slight below 80% and 65% , slight below 65% respectively whereas the dramtic fall found for the age 56-55 and over 65 approximately at 43% and 20% repectively.
For the year 2001, There was a peak at 100% for the age16-18 where the usage starts from 90% for the age group 12-15 and then the percentages of females who uses the Internet remained stable between age groups 19-24 an 25-35. Subsequently, there was slight peak at 82% for the age group 36-45 and then there was a downturn till the 30% for the age group 65+.
Overall, It can be seen that the genral trend is downword in usage of the Internet by the feamles for the both year 2000 and 2001.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, whereas, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 881.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 202.0 196.424390244 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.36138613861 4.92477711251 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2094680655 2.65546596893 83% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.490099009901 0.547539520022 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 232.2 283.868780488 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.1 1.45097560976 76% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 22.4926829268 124% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.2831324739 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.857142857 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.8571428571 22.9334400587 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.71428571429 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.140800347143 0.215688989381 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.093000859213 0.103423049105 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.081326481405 0.0843802449381 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129352317449 0.15604864568 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0688931755535 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 85.36 61.2550243902 139% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.6 11.4140731707 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 8.06136585366 84% => OK
difficult_words: 22.0 40.7170731707 54% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.9970731707 120% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.0658536585 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.