The crime rate among teenagers has increased dramatically in many countries.
Discuss some possible reasons for this increase and suggest solutions.
Nowadays the rate of crime is increasing and this becoming violent in many areas of the world. It is true that many governments failed to prevent the crimes as larger prisoners required over the last decades. Hence, Maybe we need to go back to the basis of this problem, assess the possible causes and proffer a number of approaches needs to be taken. Now, what are the key factors which are causing the rise in crime?
It is said that there are too many contributing factors for us to decide exactly which one is the main. Generally speaking, One of the most serious causes of increasing crime rate is unaware about impact of crime in their adulthood. Since they brought up under less supervision and uneducated about real life by their parents, easily choose astray to get money or their desire wish. In addition, Teenagers frequently avoid good recommendation speech by a spiritual leader. Although they received the best smart teaching these days by institution, they frequently commit a crime in this age. Furthermore, Another major cause is influence of bad friends. For example, In recent scientific study, It has been proven that bad friends encourage them to make fun of other classmates which is frequently a crime accidentally. If activity such as raging and birthday bumps could not be monitored and prevent in adulthood, it might be destroyed their carrier path. Consequently, Teenagers may get into depression and led to another crime.
Hence, What can be done now to prevent these problems? Solving these problems is not as simple as that. Firstly, Parents and younger siblings take responsibility owing to ensure that providing loving and calm environment at home. Besides this, they should make children aware about a lesson of good life and its impact by showing their success as role model. Teenagers having good role model significantly have better life in the future and leave bad habits whereas some children may lost carrier goals without any role model. Secondly, I believe that city officials ought to provide guidance and encourage teenagers to participate in sports and youth activities by investing in extra infrastructure. To illustrate, organizing global events like Olympics encourage teenagers in sports carrier. Therefore, the chances of doing valid activity would be increased among them.
In recapitulation, though it is clear that there are various reasons for increasing in crime rate, solution may be inevitable to shun the situation declining further. Personally, I tend to deem that If we adopted these measures, fewer below adulthood would affect as a result. To some extent these things are already happening. Nevertheless, more efforts are needed.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, whereas, for example, in addition, such as, as a result, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2263.0 1615.20841683 140% => OK
No of words: 437.0 315.596192385 138% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17848970252 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.57214883401 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78358708561 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 264.0 176.041082164 150% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604118993135 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 711.0 506.74238477 140% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.4268425678 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.52 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.48 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.48 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251907010593 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.059954225068 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0735318055441 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152125760696 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0423748663245 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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