The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump works

Essay topics:

The diagram below shows how a solar powered water pump works.

The diagram illustrates the process of how a solar powered water pump works to supply water to the village.Overall, It can be seen that there are three main components: A solar panel to collect energy from sun, bore pump below the land and a water tank to store the water.

The first process consist of collecting energy from sun by Solar panel which is consist of number of photovoltaic cells.This panel is situated on the high pole.Thereafter, Solar panel is tranformed energy to DC electric energy and this DC power then transmitted from panel to cap of bore pump by connected wire.The water or bore pump is located below the ground level in the land. Dc power made water pump to be ran the piston which level up the water from the land and this water is then redirected to water tank through the big pipe.The water is stored in giant water tank and it is supplied to people of rural area.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, so, then

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.0 143% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 734.0 965.302439024 76% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.53086419753 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56097713214 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 81.0 106.607317073 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.547539520022 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 228.6 283.868780488 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 8.94146341463 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 54.0 22.4926829268 240% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.8623218603 43.030603864 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 244.666666667 112.824112599 217% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 54.0 22.9334400587 235% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 3.83414634146 52% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.38522691084 0.215688989381 179% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.292426449969 0.103423049105 283% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.146558071588 0.0843802449381 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.370802540189 0.15604864568 238% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126491580373 0.0819641961636 154% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.9 13.2329268293 203% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 33.59 61.2550243902 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.0 10.3012195122 214% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 9.88 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.34 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 11.4329268293 241% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.6 10.9970731707 215% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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