Some people believe that it is essential to include Physical Education classes in the curriculum for all school-age children. Other think that children's time is better spent on more academic subjects. Discuss both view and give your own opinion.
Nowadays Physical education resolve many health problems of many people.Hence, It is vital to have Physical education from the early age in school subjects. Nevertheless, Some people believe that academic subjects should be taught more by students. so this essay will discuss both aspects. Now, Why should children has to spend more time on physical education?
There are many resaons to discuss and difficult to choose which one is the best.However, The first and most important reason is Children oftent found to be less exercise since it has become trend to play video games for extended hours and they might have more burden of homework from teachers. Consequently, they could have sedentary lifestyle and may get obesity. Furthermore, the second reason to have Physical education is to explore work oprotunities in new on demand field of physical well being such as yoga. this is beacause it has been found that most people might not have Physical knoweldge and there is few compition for providing health routine and exercise knowledge. Hence, people with essientail knoweldge of physical education are more likely to make a living and get respect in society.
On the other hand,spending more time on academic subjects. Firstly, most parents tend to deem that child would have more opportunity to select desire occupation and university to study since they could have seen trends of many decades and their past experiences. Hence, they made children to more concentrate on academic than physical education. Secondly, Many people think that having good education in academics would secure future and fincially strong enough to support family owing to technical skills in specific subject or stream. For example, Child would increase the prestige for their family and well-being.
In recapitulation, although these are the factors that could be resonalble for above two aspects. Personally, I tend deem that it is inevitable to have physical education since a physical child would have moew focus on their studies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1706.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29813664596 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71302755211 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.552795031056 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.957016816 49.4020404114 129% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.625 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.125 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.75 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256700325511 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0966021411579 0.084324248473 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627222015095 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168662054177 0.151304729494 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0853831010281 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.45 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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