The chart below shows attitudes towards culture and cultural activities in New Zealand.
The bar graph illustrates tendency towards other and culture activities in New Zealand.It is clear from the chart that majority of people who strongly agree to extra curriculum activities participation by children.
It is immediately seen that the percentage of people who believe cultural performances aid improvements in people’s lives is the same as the people who believe such activities bring them together. Just over one-third of people who slightly agree to these activities.
The next is people’s belief towards other activities. There is a striking difference between the people who strongly agree sporting activities are more vital than cultural one and people who believe children should participate in art and music activities. The figure for these is almost a quarter and almost three-quarter respectively.
1 in every 10 people strongly agree that they do not have knowledge of country’s cultural activities.
Overall, It can be seen that most people strongly agree to children participation to various activities at 74%.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: It
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, third
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.0 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 3.15609756098 317% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 18.0 33.7804878049 53% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 894.0 965.302439024 93% => OK
No of words: 160.0 196.424390244 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5875 4.92477711251 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.55655882008 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09836146213 2.65546596893 117% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 106.607317073 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58125 0.547539520022 106% => OK
syllable_count: 275.4 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.9769423635 43.030603864 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.75 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 22.9334400587 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.125 5.23603664747 21% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184364844312 0.215688989381 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.087757728833 0.103423049105 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0942306510647 0.0843802449381 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1233085981 0.15604864568 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0990253969974 0.0819641961636 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.2329268293 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 61.2550243902 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 11.4329268293 109% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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