Many species of animals and plants are in danger of becoming extinct. What are the causes of this problem, and what can be done to prevent it from happening?
There is no doubt that nowadays many parts of the world facing extinction of valueable forest plants and wildlife animals. This can lead to eco-life imbalance and in turn, result in other animals may get extinct. Besides this, there has been found that CO2 levels are increasing owing to deforestation since new plants may not effectively consume CO2. As a result, It may give rise to health issues for human.
To find effective solution for serious problems, we need to first examine the cause of the animals and plant extinction. There are three main causes. To commence with, there are major hunting activities found during the night despite hevay security of forest. This may be owing to animal products such as teeth of elephant. The second major source of plant extinction is climate change, or acid rain. Finally, There are rapid technological changes increased all over the world. For example, establishment of mobile and electrical towers.
Plant and animals population decrease are a major serious problems. Regarding animal hunting, City official ought to impose strict law to prevent hunting activites. In addition, nation’s custom department should take care of import-export of animal products. One way in which climate change could be handled is by saving trees. Furthermore, We should reduce pollution that are stems from chemical factories. As far as technological changes are concerned, government ought to keep an eye for moderate frequency of mobile towers in order to save birds those are extinct due to unable to adapt mobile frequency.
To recapitulate, if the measures that are mentioned above were introduced, we would save animal and trees species from our precious world. As a result of natural eco-life balance, we may have decrease in extinction rates.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'problem'?
Suggestion: problem
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, finally, first, furthermore, if, may, regarding, second, so, for example, in addition, no doubt, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24738675958 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72097996805 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641114982578 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 479.7 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.7844887491 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.2631578947 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1052631579 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63157894737 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204069117707 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548214080535 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0453895067405 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116947548733 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0193404657628 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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