The chart below show the average maximum and minimum temperatures between Brisbane and Canberra and the average number of days with rainfall in these two countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line and the bar chart give information about fluctuation of mean maximum and minimum temperatures in Canberra and Brisbane, whereas the bar chart compares the mean annual rainfall days in each city.
According to the chart, during the period in minimum temperatures the number of temperatures in two countries on December and November dramatically increased, while in August and September in both countries saw a significant decline.
Look at the first line graph, the minimum temperatures received 30 degrees December in both countries and 29 degrees in November, these two months is highest among 12 months. Meanwhile, the temperatures in January in Canberra is 10 degrees and in Brisbane is higher than 5 degrees ( 15 degrees). During the following in August the temperatures about 0 degrees in Canberra and 10 degrees and highest second after December and November.
Look at the second chart is bar chart, the hottest weather in both Brisbane and Canberra occurs between December and February. Generally, Brisbane experiences similar average number of days with rainfall. Meanwhile, the average number of days in Brisbane had the significantly decreased when from 14 degrees to 8 degrees in January to July. By contrast, the average number in December and November were highest among 12 months ( January to December).
All in all, there are a wide differences in temperatures received in twelve months between two countries which illustrated in this chart. These differences may be result of the number of areas requires in a certain country.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...and in Brisbane is higher than 5 degrees 15 degrees. During the following in Augu...
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...nd November were highest among 12 months January to December. All in all, there ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, may, second, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1303.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 247.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 5.27530364372 4.92477711251 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96437052324 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9209733703 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.46963562753 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 400.5 283.868780488 141% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.2975470483 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.454545455 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4545454545 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 5.23603664747 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324901335263 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12791433605 0.103423049105 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554812923102 0.0843802449381 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.176907261547 0.15604864568 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050962259646 0.0819641961636 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.2329268293 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.64 11.4140731707 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 40.7170731707 118% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.0658536585 136% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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