The chart below show the global sales of different kinds digital games from 2000 to 2006.
The bar graph illustrates, the selling of various type of computer games in the six years of period between 2000 and 2006. Units are measured in dollars.
Overall, it can be seen that the most the most popular sales over the period given was handheld games where as console games was the least sale. Mobile phone games and online games all showed an increase in the number of sales.
At the begging the handheld games were almost 10 billion dollars in 2000 which raised to 18 billion dollars at the end of the period. In terms of online games, the rate of sale in 2001 was over 1billon dollars which steadily accelerated to nearly 7 billion dollars in 2006. While online games occupied approximately 3 billion dollars in 2003, a significant boost was occurred in the amount of sale which reached to its peak level in 2006 which was round about 8 billion dollars.
Sale of online games were under 6 billion dollars in the beginning but this remained roughly firm in 2003 and 2004 (4 and 3.5 billion dollars) after this point it fall down to almost 3biilon dollars in 2006.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: This phrase is duplicated. You should probably leave only 'the most'.
Suggestion: the most
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Message: Did you mean 'whereas'?
Suggestion: whereas
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Message: Did you mean 'falls'?
Suggestion: falls
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 883.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.59895833333 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.23533390457 2.65546596893 84% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 106.607317073 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557291666667 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.4401908061 43.030603864 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.375 112.824112599 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 22.9334400587 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.25 5.23603664747 43% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.09268292683 122% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178998115845 0.215688989381 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0873675683127 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429569344333 0.0843802449381 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119159239257 0.15604864568 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.035353088239 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.2329268293 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.7 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.