The chart below shows the annual number of rental and sales (in various formats) of films from a particular store between 2002 and 2011.
Summarize the information by selectin and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the number of rentals and sales of films in annually in the period from 2002 to 2011.
Overall, the period of time between 2002 and 2006 given the fact that blu-ray DVD sales were not shown up in the market, while the rentals reach the peak with the highest quantity. Howerver, the blu-ray sales began to purchase in many stores with the lowest number, compared to other items.
The detailed information indicated in the chart depicts the downward trend of items for rent due to the booming futuristic development of the economy and technology. It was witnessed to hit a remarkable number at 180.000 before decrease to 20000 in 2011. The DVD sales on the other hand was seen a dramatic increase from 45000 in 2002 to 21000 in 2007. However, the number remained unstable when a steadily decline affected to the quantity and leaded to the drop of 220000 in 2011.
VHS sales registered a noticeable drop from 90000 by 2002 and became vanished by the year of 2006. In the contrast, the Blu-ray items thrusted into spotlight in 2007 with a humble number of 5000, and gradually rose to 14000 in 2011. Specially, by the time of 2006, both of VHS sales and Blu-ray sales were disappeared from the market.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...riod from 2002 to 2011. Overall, the period of time between 2002 and 2006 given the fact th...
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Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: BLU_RAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Blu-ray'?
Suggestion: Blu-ray
...tween 2002 and 2006 given the fact that blu-ray DVD sales were not shown up in the mark...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: BLU_RAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Blu-ray'?
Suggestion: Blu-ray
...ith the highest quantity. Howerver, the blu-ray sales began to purchase in many stores ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('steadily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decline') instead of another adjective.
...ever, the number remained unstable when a steadily decline affected to the quantity and leaded to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7037037037 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41451940933 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0654433993 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242024122256 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102842349471 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862419137021 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18079345365 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101887924992 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 14, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...riod from 2002 to 2011. Overall, the period of time between 2002 and 2006 given the fact th...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 71, Rule ID: BLU_RAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Blu-ray'?
Suggestion: Blu-ray
...tween 2002 and 2006 given the fact that blu-ray DVD sales were not shown up in the mark...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 196, Rule ID: BLU_RAY[1]
Message: Did you mean 'Blu-ray'?
Suggestion: Blu-ray
...ith the highest quantity. Howerver, the blu-ray sales began to purchase in many stores ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 397, Rule ID: A_RB_NN[1]
Message: You used an adverb ('steadily') instead an adjective, or a noun ('decline') instead of another adjective.
...ever, the number remained unstable when a steadily decline affected to the quantity and leaded to ...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, while, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 33.7804878049 142% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7037037037 4.92477711251 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41451940933 2.65546596893 91% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.537037037037 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.0654433993 43.030603864 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6 22.9334400587 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.23603664747 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.13902439024 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242024122256 0.215688989381 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.102842349471 0.103423049105 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0862419137021 0.0843802449381 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18079345365 0.15604864568 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101887924992 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.2329268293 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.54 61.2550243902 123% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.