The chart below shows numbers of adults participating in different major sports in one area in 1997 and 2017 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

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The chart below shows numbers of adults participating in different major sports in one area, in 1997 and 2017.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows that there is considerable variation in the popularity of participating in different sports, among adults in the area in question. It also shows that there were significant changes in the numbers taking part in these sports between 1997 and 2017. By far the highest number of people doing sports in 1997 did gentle walking. The figure for this was 50,000, compared with the next highest participation sport, which was aerobic gym at 36,000. However, the numbers doing gentle walking did not increase significantly over the 20-year period. Notably, there were only 5,000 more people taking part in 2017. This is in contrast with basketball, which saw a massive rise, with figures almost tripling from 9,000 in 1997 to 24,000 in 2017. Other sports also grew considerably in popularity. The number of people playing football rose from 34,000 to 48,000, and those doing hiking from 35,000 to 49,000. Figures for jogging essentially stayed the same, but there was a major decline in cricket, which had only 7,000 players in 2017, compared to 27,000 in 1997, making it the major sport with the smallest numbers participating.

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Average: 5.6 (1 vote)

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, in contrast

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 33.7804878049 101% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 965.302439024 98% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07486631016 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55940320548 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598930481283 0.547539520022 109% => OK
syllable_count: 257.4 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.4267164465 43.030603864 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.9 112.824112599 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7 22.9334400587 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 5.23603664747 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190148196052 0.215688989381 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889260738689 0.103423049105 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0683920306707 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.190148196052 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 61.2550243902 114% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 10.3012195122 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 11.4140731707 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.65 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 37.0 40.7170731707 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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