These days, more and more people move away from the area where they were born and brought up when they become adults.
Do the advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the current scenario, there has been a shift of people from their birthplace to the place where they became adults. I believe that the advantages of this phenomenon outweigh the disadvantages due to the two reasons outlined below. However, I do concede that there might be some problems related to such a development.
To begin with, a person who is more exposed to different regions of the country or the world is also more comfortable with different religions, cultures, dialects and food habits. This gives him/her a more cosmopoliton viewpoint and fosters empathy and tolerance towards others. Such a person will be more "global" in terms of thinking which is the need of the hour in all spheres of life.
Moreover, by moving around from place to place, one can adopt the best practices in education, tech, policy making, finances and so forth from the other area. This know-how can be used in the betterment of one's native place.To illustrate, a person who is born in a remote village might migrate to a larger city upon completion of his/her education in search of better job prospects. Besides, increased income, that person can also bring back the knowledge of technology (such as cellular data) for the benefit of other villagers, who might not be aware of such things.
However, if more and more people settle in other areas, then population explosion at one specific place might be possible. In such a case, there will be increased competition for basic needs like fresh water due to the high concentration of people living in one area. Another issue would be 'brain drain'. This might happen when a specific person settles in some other region after spending much of their time and resources in another region.
In conclusion, movement of people from their place of birth and upbringing to the area where they attain adulthood is mostly a positive development with certain limitations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 225, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: To
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, however, if, moreover, so, then, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1599.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.996875 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74322852391 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4602876707 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.214285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8571428571 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.07142857143 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206566269945 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0714310627302 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0502854793436 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12358612361 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044280588458 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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