The chart gives the information on the ages of the population of Yemen and Italy in 2000 and projections for 2050.
The given circular charts reveal the information about the population of Yemen and Italy based upon the three different age groups: 0-14 years, 15-50 years, 60+ years in year of 2000.
It can be seen that, in the year 2000, Yemen 50℅ of the total population of people which come in the age group of 0-14 years whereas in the year of 2050 it would be estimated to decrease upto 37℅ of total population.Moreover, the Yemen's 3.6℅ population was covered by the people of age group 60+ years. In addition to this, 46.3℅ of the population of Yemen had been populated by the people of age group 15-59 years.
Probing ahead, In the year of 2000 the population of people under the age 15-59 years was found to be 61.6℅ and it will be estimated that population of these would decrease to 46.2℅ in the next fifty years.Along with this, the population of Italy which had been covered by people of three age groups: 0-14 years of age, 15-59 years and 60+ years in the year of 2050 was 11.6℅, 42.3℅ and 46.2℅ respectively.
Overall, it is evident that population of people which was under age group of 0to 14 years had decreased in both the nation's whereas population of age group 60+ years had increased.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, whereas, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 33.7804878049 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 3.97073170732 302% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1005.0 965.302439024 104% => OK
No of words: 216.0 196.424390244 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65277777778 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.83365862548 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55162321585 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.402777777778 0.547539520022 74% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 273.6 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 8.94146341463 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 43.0 22.4926829268 191% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.893651342 43.030603864 251% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.0 112.824112599 178% => OK
Words per sentence: 43.2 22.9334400587 188% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.8 5.23603664747 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25436139717 0.215688989381 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182162816552 0.103423049105 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471937625967 0.0843802449381 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191103600411 0.15604864568 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.056799615128 0.0819641961636 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.1 13.2329268293 167% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 6.51609756098 200% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.5 10.3012195122 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.58 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 26.0 40.7170731707 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 11.4329268293 171% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.2 10.9970731707 175% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 11.0658536585 181% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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