The chart shows the proportion of people in a UK survey carried out in three different years who said they were interested in certain sports.

Essay topics:

The chart shows the proportion of people in a UK survey carried out in three different years who said they were interested in certain sports.

The bar chart demonstrates the percentage of participants who enjoyed six different types of outdoor activities in a UK survey launched in 1995, 2000 and 2005.
Overall, walking was the most popular outdoor activity among British people in all three years. Another interesting point is that there were considerable downward trends for the number of participant in snooker, tennis and golf, while this figure for rugby and swim experienced slight improvements.
Looking at details, in 1995 the percentage of people choose Rugby and Swim similarly at 24% and 22% in turn then reached the same point at around 26% in 2005, a minor change. The number of participants interested in walking grew steadily by 1% each five years to 44% in 2005.
By contrast, golf always stood at the bottom with figures fluctuated between 17% and 15% over the period. Although tennis and snooker are the second popular sports in 1995, their percentage witnessed a dramatic drop by 7% approximately by 2005.

Votes
Average: 8.9 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, second, similarly, then, while

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 826.0 965.302439024 86% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0987654321 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77733878561 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679012345679 0.547539520022 124% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 283.868780488 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.1875073065 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.0 112.824112599 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.09268292683 24% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.125248409611 0.215688989381 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0549749302763 0.103423049105 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0528538028238 0.0843802449381 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0766105606705 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0586374474569 0.0819641961636 72% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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