The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000 an the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

Essay topics:

The charts below give information about USA marriage and divorce rates between 1970 and 2000 an the marital status of adult Americans in two of the years.

The first bar chart depicts the changes in the number of marriages and divorces in the USA from 1970 to 2000, and the second one illustrates the figures for the marital status of American adults in 1970 and 2000.

It is clear, in general, that although there was a fall in the number of marriages in the USA, the number of marriages was always higher than that of divorces during the period. Besides, the majority of adult Americans were married in both two years, 1970 and 2000, but the proportion of single adults was higher in 2000.

To specify, there were 2.5 millions of marriages and 1 million divorces in the USA in 1970. The marriage rate remained stable in the next ten years, but dell to 2 million by the year 2000. In contrast, the divorce rate reached a peak in 1980, at nearly 1.4 million divorces, before falling back to 1 million at the end of the period.

As the marital status is concerned, around 70% of American adults were married in 1970, but this figure dropped to just under 60% by 2000. At the same time, the proportion of unmarried people and divorces rose by about 10% in total. On the other hand, there were fewer people who widowed after 30 years.

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 26, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '5 million'.
Suggestion: 5 million
...r in 2000. To specify, there were 2.5 millions of marriages and 1 million divorces in the...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, second, in contrast, in general, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 33.7804878049 133% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 970.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 215.0 196.424390244 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.51162790698 4.92477711251 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82921379641 3.73543355544 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25298792053 2.65546596893 85% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 106.607317073 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520930232558 0.547539520022 95% => OK
syllable_count: 285.3 283.868780488 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.4664621672 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.777777778 112.824112599 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8888888889 22.9334400587 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 5.23603664747 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.406236828434 0.215688989381 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.16057337828 0.103423049105 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10140100767 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.246327505887 0.15604864568 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0770124950392 0.0819641961636 94% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.2329268293 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.51 61.2550243902 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.17 11.4140731707 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 40.7170731707 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 11.4329268293 118% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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